wow! I really like it!
I love how you seem to have the innocence of a young child mixed with the maturity of someone older - if that makes any sense...

Poignant, and...*pauses* I don't really know what else to say. But it's very flowing, nonetheless.

:is crying: So beautiful.so sweet and expressive.:bursts into tears again:

Oh this is so sad.Forgive spelling errrrores, my eyes are filled up. My dad isn't like that, but I have been in a car accident before. They are creepy, and scary, and my glassess were off my head.

awwww! it's sooo sweet & sad!

I know you don't like to talk about this subject too much (and it's perfectly understandable why!), but I'm glad that you are able to write about it! To get out a lot of things you feel, you know? (And since your a great writer, it helps!) But very lovely poem Bry. And remember, if you need anything, I'm here for ya man! Well...girl.(^_^)

::crying:: That's so sweet. ::sniff:: It just reminds me. About a month ago, my dad was in a car crash and he almost died. He was in Mexico attending my uncle's funeral. When I heard about it, I was so scared. I thought he was hurt really badly. ::wipes eyes:: That's a beautiful dedication to your father. That's so incredibly caring.

Shinimegami: *sniffs* Awwwww, that was so beautiful, yet sad...
Bakura: *hands her a tissue*
Shinimegami: *sobs into Bakura's shirt*
Bakura: *pats Shinimegami's back*
Shinimegami: *sniff* Anyway, I really love poetry, I'm a poet myself. Your work is lovely. And thanks for reviewing my Yugi+Dark Magician ficcie. I'll see you later! ^.^
Bakura: Ja! ^.^

wow...*looks down* Bry is that really how it is??? *sighs* i wish i could help someway. u know i'm always here...

That was beautiful. *hugs* I can totally see how it must feel and stuff...my best wishes are with you and your father. Very beautiful poem.