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| SliversofSilverPain 2005-09-10 ch 1,   | that's so sad! it made me cry as i read it, flinch away from the screen. but it was very very well written. nice descriptions, and well explained why and how in the short amount of writing; it's very very very well done! |
| Sallymander 2004-02-02 ch 1, | Hmm...seems like there's been experience. I don't mean to pry... anyways, this was really descriptive. It's so sad yet true. |
| Lady Sunlight 2003-12-04 ch 1, | I use a perfecto knife doesn't work as good as a razor. |
| killingaurora 2003-11-20 ch 1, | I love your simplistic style of writing. I agree with SilverInsanity - your choice of words is really good. I was just wondering...do you cut? The way your piece is written reminds me of the prose I write about my SI. Like, really descriptive and real - something a non-SIer wouldn't know. BTW, thanks for commenting on my Edge story, suicidel angel. |
| SilverInsanity 2003-06-17 ch 1, | This is really good... It's a really good point of view... i would know... I like your use of words. |
| canihavea-soda 2003-04-29 ch 1, | Oh God...I have to call one of my friends. This poem just suddenly made me remember her - damn, I should have called hours ago. (Tis a strange thing to write in a review, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart. My friend went through a phase like this, and she's on her own. Must dash. I will read more of your marvellous work as soon as I can. Thanks again!) |
| Golden Rain 2002-11-02 ch 1, | er... well im not quite sure how 2 say this... but im figureing the person in this is u... i know how u feel... probably loadsa peeps say this 2 u ... but i can relate... ummmm im gonna b a MASSIVE hypocrite here... but u probably shouldn't cut urself... its not the smartes of things 2 do... ummm... that's y im dumb LOL errr nice story.... but could do with some paragraphs... umm ja ~Golden Rain~ |
| darkmoon-on-dragonwings 2002-11-02 ch 1, | Good story, i write about sucide and self mutilation too. I really liked it. |
| elijahwoodsangel 2002-11-02 ch 1, | *gasps* er...speechless...absolutely brilliant.... |
| Charm 2002-11-02 ch 1, | Up the rating. Written great, it doesn't bother me cos God knows I do it myself, but rated G?? For having a graphic description of a mediaeval battle scene I got told to take it to pg13+ - R... that's over the top, but anyway. Nice reading. You really are in love with language, aren't you? ;) don't worry, one to another. Nice read, I enjoyed it, but please- up the rating. For the children!! ~Charm ps- i wonder. do you write poetry? |