pretty. Simple response but it was pretty, to me at least.

wow. every fall i feel that, and you finally wrote the poem I could not. applause. 0.0

wow. this was so good. i'm speechless. (rare occurance, i assure you) This was well-written (as all of your stories and chapters are), and really gets you in this mood. I know i'm probably sounding really weird right now, but oh well. Oh, if you like poems and stuff like that, read stories by Myfanwy. She wrote an amazing story called "Racing the Storm". Oh, and while i'm completely off the subject, update "Another Path" soon. I know i haven't reviewed the last chapter, but I plan on doing that soon. I don't get alot of times these days, between riding my horse (I got her recently, so we need to "work through our difficulties and get accustomed to each other".) and homework. Teachers give us so much, and we're only 14! *curses teachers*
ok..... back to the fic. I liked how you compared the leaf to a soldier and I liked basically everything about this poem. Great job!

Mag

Very good poem! I love how you compared the leaf to a soldier!

Very cool. I love autumn.
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