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deuteriuM Xtreme 2002-11-03 . chapter 1
wow. scary. aha. not tying to be sarcastic here. anyway hmm. a silent attacker! a bleep! [you yell] [you faint] [i laugh evilly]
anyway for mine i wrote mother waiting for son at train station...stupid. cos i finished a better one then i found out tt we have to base it on WAITING. what stupid limits. huh. so redo loh.
short and good. mine is loooooooooong winded. kill myself.
note: suspense not suspend. suspend is like, suspending sth in mid air? like fillintheblank? woohoo. thinking too much again.
darkened-soul 2002-11-02 . chapter 1
i like it. very suspenseful! your good at writing suspence! check out my story Changeing the Life, it sucks!
*~darkened-soul*~
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