damn! its good ...on the ground ..lol

this is 1 of your worst! i like it!

Lovely! I love snow it is cold here. But we suppose to get snow next week. I'm hoping! You did a good job on this piece. R&R me sometime and keep writing!

lol, hehe. It's cute ^_^ I love winter, but unfortunately it hasn't snowed here yet

-Jessie

This was a nice poem, teh idea was creative and the imagry was nice, but it missed alot. What about the festivities of winter, the joy and pain. What about the wind and the early nights. If you elaborated more it would be brilliant.