lovely...twisted and morbid...interesting...

Twisted. I love it! Without a doubt one of the most interesting poems I have read in a while. I can't get enough of the ending. It's perfect.

O! I like this one! If I weren't the psycho that I was, I probably wouldn't have laughed at the ending but, I AM psycho...
Anywho...good job!
Lonely Empty Eyes

i like, i like.

ew... disturbing, to say the least.

Very original and creepy ... I like how it feels.

Hehe. Yes, I'd like to play. I'll go first. You're a kickass writer, I may add...

OO! Great ending...and kewl format..._

Very interesting way to write...It's a new style I've never seen before. It's a good one though. I like it.

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

Wow. *stares* How is it you are so good? I envy you! lol. Very mysterious poem. I love this. You are definitely on my favorite author's list.

I love the idea of making it a game. It is a bit phycotic, but that just gives it Flavour.

*shivers* I'm a little spooked by the initiation of the poem... and for it to have an effect like that, it's obviously good ! I love it !

Keep on!

Hmm interesting... I'm not sure whether to laugh or to be scared...hehehe No but seriously it was good, short but sweet. Good job!

Whoo...goodie! I like this one! (Hey, I pretty much like ALL your stuff...) Ooh...write more! I can't wait!

Whee! *disappears*

That's awesome! Out of all the one's I have read so far, this one is my favorite. So much my favorite, in fact, that I am going to put it on my favorite's list! _

You are very good at manipulating your formatting to make your point get across better.

Keep writing!

Namir Swiftpaw