Reviews for Wings of the Heart

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Melika Elena 2007-03-03 ch 15,	Hey! This was a great, light hearted fantasy story. I enjoyed Ella's character, although I think at time she was a little too perfect. Gavin was great (I wouldn't mind dating him, haha)-- he provided some nice comic relief. Arin was drool-worthy as well. While there were some missing pieces to this story (how was it that Gavin and Arin could shape shift but Ella could not?) and I would have liked to see more of Ella's sister and parents in the story, but otherwise, I really enjoyed it. Great job!
lilylupin7 2006-10-07 ch 15,	This was so Shrekish...cutecutecute. You are now a favorite author
lilylupin7 2006-10-07 ch 4,	Absolutely bloody freaking amazing so far! It's like Lord of the Rings (but not as...overly detailed thank goodness)
Michelle Kim 2006-08-16 ch 4,	Hey, I know it's been quite awhile since you've written your story but while reading halfway through it.. I felt the need to comment on your writing. First off, I love your storyline and your exquisite details but I have a huge problem with your grammar. More than half of the time you're writing run-ons and there are so many commas in your sentences that it leaves the reader quite confused at what your main focus is. In fact, it gives me a headache trying to go through one paragraph but I look past it because your creativity beckons me to do so. Don't get me wrong because I'm not trying to flame you or anything of the sort. I'm writing this in hopes that perhaps you'll organize your sentences in such a way that leaves your story to be read with ease and clarity. This is by far the longest review I've ever written on fictionpress lol. With all that said, you are indeed a fabulous writer and I hope you continue to share your stories with us :]
relyn 2006-07-25 ch 15,	-sigh- That was absolutely beautiful. Heh, okay, I know you wrote this ages ago and all, and I am normally a lazy reviewer, but your story is amazing. Seriously. Your detail to descriptions make everything so real... and Arin is perfect. -swoons- Bwahahaha. Honestly, I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews. You definitely deserve them. Anyways, great work, I absolutely completely totally loved it. Keep it up!
SKoW Awards 2006-06-22 ch 1,	Congratulations, Kates! Your story, Wings of the Heart, has been nominated at Some Kind of Wonderful Romance Awards (SKoW Awards) for Best Fantasy/Sci-Fi (Complete). Keep up the great work! -Jeninafreewebs.com/skow
Tearjerker22 2006-06-08 ch 15,	AH! That was GREAT! Wow, I absolutely loved it! It gave me goosebumps! Where do you get these ideas? I couldn't come up with something like this in a million years! You should definitely think about getting this published. If any story makes it, this one should! Keep writing; you're a natural!
Tearjerker22 2006-06-06 ch 6,	I loved that chapter! It was so exciting, especially when you first found out that Arin was kidnapped! Plus, I loved the way you added humor to a desperate situation, when Arin mocked his captors. Perfect! I can't wait to read on!
ReinaLucille 2006-06-05 ch 5,	again, i know the story is complete and you've been done with it forever, but i still like to review. i feel like in the beginning you had elladine be this strong, if a bit big-headed independent woman who was above the silliness of women taking the lead from the men. though obviously, as seen in the fight with the ogres, she can handle herself when push comes to shove, gaving and arin clearly are calling the shots. elladine now more commonly just comments on the mystique and loneliness of arin- and though i am intrigued, i wish she'd stop being so girlie.
ReinaLucille 2006-06-05 ch 3,	i know it's been ages since you wrote wings of the heart, but it's rather good, and i'm really enjoying it, and i figure it's always nice to get a compliment on your work, even if it is four years later!
Tearjerker22 2006-06-05 ch 5,	This is so good so far! Wow, it's really keeping me on the edge of my seat with anticipation! I love original fairy tales, but this has to be one of the best I've ever read!
The Hand Behind This Pen 2006-05-21 ch 15,	Oh update thesequeal, please? It's the best EVER! You rock random author-person :ByeMutilatedBliss
The Hand Behind This Pen 2006-05-21 ch 1,	ooh what happens, what happens?
Lady of Light 77 2006-04-21 ch 15,	Hello again Kates,Another wonderful tale, and now that I finished this I think I shall go back and read My Beauty My Beast. You have a wonderful talent. Keep on writing, and using the gift that the Three have given you. God bless.Lady of Light 77
Poppy Pyres 2005-08-17 ch 7,	You have a bit of redundancy.It was a book."It's a book," she heard her voice say. The way Arin brought Ella back is too much like the way Aragorn brought backEowyn in LOTR.

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