i absolutely love this! i love d lines 'inside myself i lie passed out living with no sense of being' u truly have an amazing talent for poetry.. and beleive me no one wit this talent can just b no body... WELL DONE! keep up d amazin work! love and admiration Gretchen45 x please read and review my story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot and its angsty and different and id love ur opinion... love yax hope to hear from u soon!