Dude... This was ** beautiful. I mean, wow. Seriously. I love it. So a favorite poem now.

This one's kind of weird. I had to read it a few times to understand which way you're going. (In other words I'm not myself today, normally it takes a reading or two.) But It's an intresting way to look at love and I do believe that the way you see it actually is common, and I've witnessed it. But it's good nonetheless

that was a sad and Misunderstanding poem. . . i like it!

Hm.. I don't know what to make of this. I like the last stanza though. It flows nicely.
Dai stiho
~CrimsonCat~