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starlit blade
2004-06-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseTut tut, dearie, the things you do for tips. *grins like a shark* How nice it is to know that Fate fears me... ha ha! More good stuff, yesh yesh, more good.
Broadwaypoetess *LaBloodyRo...
2002-12-28
ch 2,
abuseMy God, prostitution..

George: Or strippers...

Broadwaypoetess: My God, that was amazing. Sadistic! Biting! A fab poem!
Queenie1
2002-12-13
ch 1,
abuseoh wow... i love it... ur story is eggsactly some of the stuff i have been thinking and.. wow, when did u learn to read minds???
Love ~Queenie!~
NovaKayne
2002-12-02
ch 1,
abuseOooh I like this a lot. I just found a poem I wrote a while ago the other day called "Innocence Lost" that I'll have to upload. U reminded me...

This was really good. I understood the thoughts you were trying to convey very well and the rhyming was great!!

Licia aka Persley Snow
Aftertaste of a Razorblade
2002-11-04
ch 2,
abuse'the things i do for tips'
Great. Just great. And once again, I love the lack of capital letters.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade
2002-11-04
ch 1,
abuseLove it. Love it, love it. And I think it's cool that you didn't use any caps. That adds something to it.
Daylily Gold
2002-11-04
ch 2,
abuseVery dark, but strangely lovely, too. Enough to make a jaded person blink and a sensitive person wince for shared pain.
ShInEyShOeS
2002-11-04
ch 2,
abusewaaaah! i want some cheap pills!!!!!
ShInEyShOeS
2002-11-04
ch 1,
abuseme is sad:
Lira-chan
2002-11-04
ch 1,
abuseHehe, that was a bit scary, personally. Hmm, sounds like one of those things that depress some people, but dont depress others... I'm an other. I like it... refreshing^^ Thankies for lovely poem, u stayed home from skool today? Wouldnt bug ya in the review, but ya aint on AIM, and u say u get these fast... Thankies

Luv ya platonically,

~_^ Alira (definitely stealing that line, hope you dont mind. I love it^^)
penfin
2002-11-04
ch 1,
abusevery powerful...good job
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