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| starlit blade 2004-06-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseTut tut, dearie, the things you do for tips. *grins like a shark* How nice it is to know that Fate fears me... ha ha! More good stuff, yesh yesh, more good. |
| Broadwaypoetess *LaBloodyRo... 2002-12-28 ch 2, | abuseMy God, prostitution.. George: Or strippers... Broadwaypoetess: My God, that was amazing. Sadistic! Biting! A fab poem! |
| Queenie1 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseoh wow... i love it... ur story is eggsactly some of the stuff i have been thinking and.. wow, when did u learn to read minds??? Love ~Queenie!~ |
| NovaKayne 2002-12-02 ch 1, | abuseOooh I like this a lot. I just found a poem I wrote a while ago the other day called "Innocence Lost" that I'll have to upload. U reminded me... This was really good. I understood the thoughts you were trying to convey very well and the rhyming was great!! Licia aka Persley Snow |
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2002-11-04 ch 2, | abuse'the things i do for tips' Great. Just great. And once again, I love the lack of capital letters. |
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2002-11-04 ch 1, | abuseLove it. Love it, love it. And I think it's cool that you didn't use any caps. That adds something to it. |
| Daylily Gold 2002-11-04 ch 2, | abuseVery dark, but strangely lovely, too. Enough to make a jaded person blink and a sensitive person wince for shared pain. |
| ShInEyShOeS 2002-11-04 ch 2, | abusewaaaah! i want some cheap pills!!!!! |
| ShInEyShOeS 2002-11-04 ch 1, | abuseme is sad: |
| Lira-chan 2002-11-04 ch 1, | abuseHehe, that was a bit scary, personally. Hmm, sounds like one of those things that depress some people, but dont depress others... I'm an other. I like it... refreshing^^ Thankies for lovely poem, u stayed home from skool today? Wouldnt bug ya in the review, but ya aint on AIM, and u say u get these fast... Thankies Luv ya platonically, ~_^ Alira (definitely stealing that line, hope you dont mind. I love it^^) |
| penfin 2002-11-04 ch 1, | abusevery powerful...good job |