Tut tut, dearie, the things you do for tips. *grins like a shark* How nice it is to know that Fate fears me... ha ha! More good stuff, yesh yesh, more good.

My God, prostitution..

George: Or strippers...

Broadwaypoetess: My God, that was amazing. Sadistic! Biting! A fab poem!

oh wow... i love it... ur story is eggsactly some of the stuff i have been thinking and.. wow, when did u learn to read minds?

Love Queenie!

Oooh I like this a lot. I just found a poem I wrote a while ago the other day called "Innocence Lost" that I'll have to upload. U reminded me...

This was really good. I understood the thoughts you were trying to convey very well and the rhyming was great!

Licia aka Persley Snow

'the things i do for tips'

Great. Just great. And once again, I love the lack of capital letters.

Love it. Love it, love it. And I think it's cool that you didn't use any caps. That adds something to it.

Very dark, but strangely lovely, too. Enough to make a jaded person blink and a sensitive person wince for shared pain.

waaaah! i want some cheap pills!

me is sad:

Hehe, that was a bit scary, personally. Hmm, sounds like one of those things that depress some people, but dont depress others... I'm an other. I like it... refreshing Thankies for lovely poem, u stayed home from skool today? Wouldnt bug ya in the review, but ya aint on AIM, and u say u get these fast... Thankies

Luv ya platonically,

_ Alira (definitely stealing that line, hope you dont mind. I love it)

very powerful...good job