oh, wow... that last paragraph made me feel ill. good work.

AK

That was quite the tearjerker. I never saw the ending coming. I thought it was just a piece on single motherhood. Wow! Excellent work.

Beautiful piece of work. If only everyone else saw life the same way.
~wonk

Oh.

OMG, that was fantastic! Wonderful story. Very good, and it flowed well and everything! You are a very wonderful writer, and I'm glad I'm reading your stories now! :D :D :D :D

By sheer empathy, you are now the only guy I know who is allowed to have an opinion on abortion. Very, very well done.

I...I'm at a loss for words.

Being a girl myself I can honnostly tell you I would of have had no idea you are a guy by reading this. If you were a girl I would think that this is real. When it was over I had to remind myself that it was just fiction, because it felt so real.

Incredible.

Wow, I don't know what to say...but wow...that was, really...wow

Neat plot twist, it was an original idea too. Well done.

I applaud you to the fullest. That was one of the greater and ...meaningful pieces of work I've read on ff.net. I give you praise, and lots of it, for this remarkable piece of work.

Oh the world would drown with tears if they all could read this... Honestly, it was one of the best works I've read so far on Fanfiction.net. By the ending with the twist, you're not paying attention to plot elements, but you become fully immerced in the emotion.
That was beautiful.

If only the world could read what you've written...we'd think twice about abortion. I'm continually blown away by your ability and perception into human nature.

very well written...and profound. I can't believe a guy could've written something that well from a woman's perspective. Nice job. ;)

Oh...I liked your style of writing. A very very sweet story...it's good. (I'm stuck for words today...quite obviously...)