aw...that was so sweet. I can relate to it.

Amanda
Aka
Flutter

I like it a whole lot! It's so sad, but life can be like that sometimes. . .you rock my spiffy mineral-thingie!

your poem sort of keeps the thought hanging...that adds a nice, sad touch to it. Keep it up! I hope you culd read some of my poems too...Anyway, write more & good luck!

Sad! Written well! You did a good job! Keep writing!!