You are a great writer, i would like to know your insperation.

if that actually happened, I'M SO SORRY! It's so depressing, just the way I like 'em. I love it!

I'm speechless...-_-"

again,, ahve you gotta tune for taht? i love it.

Good song, nice sort of rhythm to it. The second part (As I'm Standing on the edge...) I especially like.

you should be in my band

you should be in my band

you should be in my band

you should be in my band

you should be in my band

WEEHAHA! Awesome lyrics Della. Really angst-y like. I like your bio hun *Wink wink* Very classy.

awww.. poor Je'Sorto :(
Superb imagery! And some great lines too.. I esp love

And my memories of you will never fade

Repeating that stanza at the end was a good idea. I really liked this. I can imagine someone...stuff has happened to them, and I have seen it. And now they really are on an edge...

It's very nicely written. It's not an incredibly deep song, but in some ways, it is. I love the chorous, and it's a very nicely written song. Awesome job

-Jessie

This one strikes me as musical, in a free flowinng sort of way. The rhythm is less definite so it'd be some sort of lyrical song. Interesting heaven/hell references i think they add to it, give it a feel of the depth.