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Mitochondriac 2008-05-18 ch 9,	abuseIt's amazing I love it! I read it all in a day and couldn't stop, I actually FELT what Leon felt and it was GREAT! Wow. Thanks so Much! Hachel ;)
Lady Psychic 2006-11-28 ch 9,	abuseWow, this is a really good story! It was very original. But is this really the end? You left it with a cliff-hangerish ending! Oh well, it was still a very good story.
Sysi 2006-08-05 ch 9,	abuseThis story is sinfully good! It's wonderful. ...I'm completely speechless. And please, please, I beg you, DO NOT write a sequel to it!
Steph 2006-07-13 ch 9, anon.	abuseAngela and the boys have this knowledge that other people are ignorant of. They're aware of this other world, this reality that everyone else chooses not to recognize exists. I don't know if you intended the story be this way, but it applies to real life, to my life, and I can so closely relate with it. I'm aware of stuff that others aren't, and I can relate with the characters because I experience the same feelings of fear and isolation that comes with having that awareness/knowledge. I don't know if you even intended for the fic to be this deep, but it totally hits close to home, despite the people in mirrors, goupy telephones, and werewolves. All of which were insanely entertaining, by the way. The characterization is awesome, and the situations in which you place them is refreshingly un-cliched. The scenarios are so dark and spooky, and because of the way you described them, I could really feel the anxiousness and despair the characters must feel. Be careful though; some spots in the fic came off as contrite. I love this fic!
lilylupin7 2006-07-13 ch 9,	abuseNO! How could you leave such a cliffhanger of an ending?
Jumpin Jellyfish 2006-03-13 ch 9,	abuseThat is seriously one of the craziest, most confusing, frightening, and pick-you-up-throw-you-down-kick-you-from-behind-and-spin-you-around stories i have ever read and i loved it. it was exciting and mysterious and it got me thinking about alternates. The action never stopped, but it wasn't exhaustingly continous. you, my dear, are an inspiration.
sporkess 2005-10-31 ch 9,	abuseHell no, you can't end it here! This fic became my rabid obsession for an entire evening, you can't just cut me off with nothing! Apart from that complaint, I have several things I wanted to say. The declarations of love are creepy and stalkerish, and you probably did not need to know about my plans to kidnap this story and make a new life with it in Mexico. So we can skip that part. I am thoroughly impressed. Alright anything vaguely existential and philosophical tends to turn me into a pile of awe, but you managed to keep up a fascinating plot and addictive characters along with your interesting comments. I particularly liked the Christianity references, especially chapter 1's "Oh, it's all very well and good to blame it on the serpent, to blame it on the woman, to blame it on God's interesting grasp of reverse psychology". Very cleverly presented. I guess... The story does have some resolution. Maybe it would seem tacked on if you continued it there. But in that case, I should like to request a sequel. And if you have already written one, then I shall read it soon.
not quite relevant 2005-10-03 ch 1,	abuseThat was possibly one of my favorite stories ever. I really enjoy your writing in general, but I'd have to say that this was my favorite. I love Meek to death because he's so screwed up. What made me like it all so much is that I hate happy endings and it doesn't exactly constitute as being one. Congratulations and thanks for writing such an awesome fic. :]
Saul 2005-04-05 ch 9, anon.	abuseIt ended?! How could you end it like that?! I hate not knowing what happens... Lovely story.
Saul 2005-04-05 ch 3, anon.	abuseI like Neil. Neil and Leon should hook up. =3
Walter Dash 2005-03-31 ch 9,	abuseYou can't just end it there! The game wasn't over yet. There was so much left unanswered.
ManIACjAcKaL 2005-03-28 ch 9,	abusewow! This story is awesome!! yey!
Shoujo Kitsune 2004-08-18 ch 9,	abuseWow! This is a brilliant story. It's very detailed and imaginitive. I hope you arn't finished with it yet, because I want to read more. (A part 2 would be great)... I abolutly adore Niel, he is just so wonderful, and I hope to see some more of Angela. I think it would be nice if Leon switches the tables on Meek and baffles him with his own game. Maybe you could add some more creatures or finish up on the wolf-man thread. (these are just some ideas!) Thank-you again for such a magnificent tale!
Isshina Takamasa 2004-08-11 ch 9,	abuseThis was a great story! It was great in every aspect! I loved it! Such a great mystery! Claps :D
lemmus egregius 2004-07-27 ch 9, anon.	abuseLOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE DIES I'm totally going fangirl on your *. hugs computer screen* My brain is so happy! This story was brain CANDY! M... Thank you.

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