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| clifjumpr13 2002-11-24 ch 2,   | Hmmm, interesting start, to this one. Pretty original, and definitely one that I'm going to have to come back for. I'm afraid that its a bit too early for me to stick my nose in with criticism, constructive or otherwise, however, I'll be back. You've been warned. lol Anyway, stop by and give me a read, if you have the time. |
| Jim 2002-11-06 ch 1, | I think your story has a good wealth of potential twists and turns and is pretty original for sci-fi. Your writing skills are'nt bad and you seem to have a good begining to an interesting story. My only advise is to keep the story real and keep on writing. Looking forward to see what happens next. |