Excellent, this is very good! I liked description of Naya's appearance, but I really loved their home. It sounds so beautiful. The whole space fae concept is so intriguing as well. What a nice image of Naya's sculpturing of the Earth. And I personally find the whole name translation and lesson thing nicely presented. Congrats on a fic well done.

I like it! ^_^

Very good stories... Yep all mine are at Elfwood, thought they'd do better there. Maybe not. Anyways Icy Red Blue's first line was SUPPOSED to be centered, unfortunatly my computer is a moronic pile of crap. (Yeah, so what I yell at my computer...) Hee hee I should get some more poems up. I should also write that HP fanfic that I've had in my head for a while. And the story that Elfwood wouldn't let me post. And I should write the 2nd chapter to something else. TTFN, I gotta get a move on!

I think that's a fine analogy, but I WAS glad when you explained that Tal created Time, instead of disease (hey, I have a soft spot for anything with Fae blood! I wanna think it's good, unless they tell me it's bad, in which case it's just cool...). Other than that, this was quite magnificent, though the use of the word "Faes" was rather disruptive to my reading, since not only is it not a familiar term (I'm used to 'Fae'), but it feels wrong to my mind - I'm not sure how to explain it, really. I realize that the change in spelling was intentional, but it was very distracting.

oooh, very deep. I like it a lot. Keep on writing.~CT

*dumb bunny look* ......Wow! I got shivers up my spine as I read the end! It's so... meaingingful. I wish I could write like you... or not, then that would be copying, and I don't want that, either....
OK, you might want to not put in the three stars at a change, just put in something like ~*~ near the edge, b/c otherwise there's little squares all over the page... but otherwise, wonderful!! Is it true? Just kidding. But it felt very true....

Wow - this story is incredible! It painted such a beautiful picture in my mind! Your descriptions are amazing, and the way that the characters interact with one another is so realistic! I'm definitely adding you to my favortie author's list! Please write more - I'd like to read more about your worlds!