wonderful!

Aw! The end of that really turns it around. Makes me the reader appreciate what I've got. Funny how only one of the stanzas is true...you've got the personality of someone that scared down well, though somehow i doubt it's you...

And yet the world keeps turning. Piety.

This is how I feel during that time of the month, lol. And when I'm real depressed.

Good poem. I struggled through all of the self-hatred..wow...there's quite a bit. Watch out now, you're nearing my standards. L loved the last lines, they really made it all so much better. Well done.

Oh my god. I don't think you have realized it so i'll tell you. This poem is about me. WD

Some of that was pretty good... such a shame people should feel this way. Anyway, keep rocking dude.

*sniffs* I know how it feels to feel so badly of yourself. It's a really a hard thing to overcome, espicially when you actually believe it and feel you know it's true. But It's not :). You were made in God's image , and you have so many people around you who love you very much. Bless ya heaps xoxox

very powerful, bex. but remember, we love you and everything about you.

wow...i don't know what to say, i love you

You certainly have talent. It was interesting how you made this seem like you were making fun of yourself, in a mean way, but yet you were defending yourself. Very cool way of writing this.

*sob* every thing you said describes me perfectly! *sob* oh well i guess everyone feels like that. :/

i liked the ending the best.. not because it was over but because you like explained everything in 4 lines.

Another brilliant, brutally honest poem. I like the fact that it's straight up front... and could actually picture myself in front of that mirror image you where describing...

Are you talking about yourself? It was beautifully written and anyone who can write like that can't be those things you described.