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| lilblondedevil4u 2003-07-09 ch 1,   | ! Outstanding |
| super-flirt 2002-11-28 ch 1, | Wow...This poem was awesome. I must tell you that this is one of the greatest poems I have read in my life!! |
| Filtered Words 2002-11-06 ch 1, | Wow. Not much words. But very deep. |
| SlythSiren 2002-11-06 ch 1, | I think I'll refer to my goth-makeup as war paint from now on... |
| Odin1 2002-11-06 ch 1, | Very good. My Fiance' was in Basic for the Air Force. She couldn't wear make-up. And on graduation they were allowed, but the TI said that they had to take it off when they got back. "You aren't going to war, so you don't need your war paint". His words. I don't know why I shared this. But it was the first thing I thought of when I read your poem. Keep it up. |
| lyre in the stars 2002-11-06 ch 1, | hmm... secret indian chants at midnight, with smokescent winging upon the wind. That's what I see when I read that. excellent job, mon cherie. |