Sad, emotional, moving. I loved it. Wow!

OH! MY! GOODNESS! I was just reading along, going 'this is so unrealisic, nobody's parents are ever totally like that' when it hit me like a ton of bricks in the face. This is one of my favorites by you! That was so cool!

heres the review u wanted. i suck at these but here goes.

very well written. very descriptive. i felt like i was there. spellin n punctuation errors every now n again. seems incomplete but i think u said u were still workin on it. oh well.

lates

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