Great poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Twilight Starr

Wonderful. Simply, truly, wonderful. I like your poems. _ Baibai!

your an awesome writer

This is inexpressibly FANTASTIC BEYOND WORDS. Your imagery, similies and metaphors are incredible, magical, real to the point where I think I'm living among them. Usually I single out a specific line or two that particularly impresses me, but I'd have to copy the entire poem in this case. :) It's breathtaking, really. What true poetry is supposed to sound like. PLEASE please please write more! AWESOME job! Keep it up!