I really like how you used the "circle" and in the last stanza used the beginning of the first one. Quite effective. On a more personal level...OMG That is soooooo sad. Why does life do that to people sometimes?
this peom is so sad... you must have been really hurt when you found out what had happened... why does life have to be so mean?.....
Oh well... well written poem though, especially about 'the face bulged under her skin.'
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