I'm hoping chapter 20 is the end of this book, as I'm just about to read the others... :-)

Well, I must say, this is just brilliant. I love it. A few too many "sidelong glances" though, methinks. :-)

Brilliant. :-) Once again, I love the dialogue.

sounds good

oh my gosh! I love your story. please update soon. The cellphone thingy is going to bug me until I find out.

this is an awesome story! r u plainin 2 write another followin it? it would be great if ya did!! :-P

I hope you get this being as this is kind of an old story..hehe. Anyway, I loved it! I meant to read only the first chapter or so, but I couldnt' stop. I'm off to read your sequel... I'm excited to find a Christian author here who can balance a good plotline with religion without it being overbearing, ya know? Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I loved it...

The end? the end?! injustice! you BETTER have a seqel ^.~

Yay, you made Tenku very happy with this chappie ^^

Haha, i liked this chapter!

i heard that line before. I'm betting poor Viki is gunna break down

If he's like that, I'll be forced to murder you in the night and laugh insanely.
No, really.







darn, you aren't stupid... darn it! lolXD! Just kidding, I hope he's not liek that

YES! They finally gor their acta ll nice and perty ^^

Yes! YES! They are finally acknowledging each other! The dumb bunnies aren't so dumb! yay!

I
m gunna die if they don't get together

Kyle is SUCH a jerk!