 Elij 2003-02-16 . chapter 1Great beginning for a promising tale! I love your descriptive imagery, ie:
'The cold autumnal wind howled around the trees, sounding like some primeval beast on the prowl.'
And.
'.her long ash blond hair falling in waves over her shoulders and her stick thin body hunched up over her book.'
There are other beautiful examples of good descriptive writing, too, that carry your story along very well.
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