please update soon, this is awesome and in the summery it said assasin, but theres anouther s, its assassin. update soon.

This is a very good start. Keep it up, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I like your characterization of Rahhe.

You updated!!!!!!!! I wanna find out how her parents died!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update A.S.A.P and if you could e-mail me when you do update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ja ne!!!!!!!!!!

~Moon Mistress~_^

hey shadowcat! Great story. Hope you update soon. I want to know what happened next. K?

shadowcat, (hehe) we have too much in common. you know that new story i started, but you haven't read (i think i told you about it... i had that problem about choosing a name for my character) she can do magic that takes away energy or magical power (if her victoms have any) before she kills them. she wouldn fit in the black rose clan-hehehe.

but anyway, i'm glad you updated this! and you better update again cuz it's really cool! and if her parents die like the parents in my story, we better have a major talk cuz our minds have too much in common!

hehe, anyway, take care and UPDATE IT!

~*~Jo~*~

Good work! :) I would like to see more of this. Some of the descriptions are a little blunt for me, but that's a style. ^^

Nice!!! I like your foundation of building with her parents! Excellent Work!!

~Nem~

Great first chapter. This story has potential. I hope you update again soon!

Hey! Great first chapter! I like this!!! Please update soon! Ja!

~Moon Mistress~_^