very nice...makes you think. great job! :) i made new poems...just incese you want to read. ::wink::

wow, really good way of putting it! It's unbelievable how you turned this poem around from an evil death-threat to a hopeful message! Cool! I absolutely agree with you than only in darkness will one see the light! Keep it up! And do try to read my new poem, okay? Good luck!

I loved you poem. It's so true that we need both good times and bad times in our life to more fully appreciate it. Great job!

I don't know, but it seems a little angsty to me. ^_^;. As an inspirational poem, I think it falls a little short, but as an angst poem it isn't bad at all. It reminds me of the song "Cry".