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| Twinkling Moon 2007-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseVery powerful. It's such a shame that some family's don't let their kids be who they want to be, instead of the parent's dream child. |
| Tate Soyker 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm about to cry! That was amazing and so sad! It's a very lovely piece in a broken hearted way. |
| dreamaway 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. |
| Shadow 3013 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abuseIncredibly haunting, very sad. It isn't perfect in the area of rhythym, but it does well enough--certainly doesn't distract from the content. All in all a truly gorgeous poem that I'm glad to have read. |
| Appleofdeadfish554 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abusevery sad i liked it alot i'm going to go read the storie now |
| Stefen 2004-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad! I hope you don't mind but I told all friends about it and they all love it! It's so gorgeously sad. And brilliantly written |
| Cassaclyzm 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this poem. I particularly liked the last line of each stanza, and how it concludes the piece. Very nicely done. |
| NuMbGrl-15 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abusetear* that was a sad poem! I liked it though Sam |
| kate aka katwin 2003-06-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, in an upsetting sort of way. A poweful poem. Wow. |
| Gia 2003-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Just wow. I really like this. You have talent. I've read some of your other stuff... very goo stuff. Keep up the good work. |
| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2003-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm crying again - you are wonderful. Really. |
| Kawarinaku Kinsei 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseAfter reading the story formed from this, I have to say. I love you! OO;; |
| Pound 2003-02-02 ch 1, | abusewow. well written. its really sick how ppl treat gays. |
| Sara Jo Jensen 2003-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful- but sad how i see my stepdad in the father- he holds so many prejudices. Your words flow very well and make it easy to fully appreciate the message, rather than being bogged down with awkward language. thanks. |
| Raija D. 2003-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOooh...chills up my spine. yes indeed, they are chilly chilling chills....yeah. Whooo...haven't been here for a while! Where'd all your other stuff go? Meh...but I like your writing now! Is vaguely scary, but yay! |