oooooooooo wow this rocked its really really powerful

lol easy to guess i liked it

Then, like a shapeless shadow

very good image i love your poems so much theyre so powerful, deep and amazing like u really *blushes*

well done keep writing

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Good poem. I liked how you described sleep as a shapeless shadow waiting to capture you when you're least aware. Keep writing!

Sleepless night are nerve racking. Awesome job! Keep writing!

Good poem. I like the way sleep was described, since that's the way it always is with me. I'm always tired, but I can't sleep. Sometimes I even shake myself awake as I'm dozing off, for some odd reason. Great job, keep writing!