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i sense something. all of you ppl from the same cca type in the same manner. or am i thinking too much?

anyway cool flashback! but yomer couldve helped viona when she was being almost fillintheblank. weird. haha. anyway are you trying to fit in? like, changing the way some words are spelt...i dont know. well. and cackled spelt correctly! haha. or else the man becomes some chicken and clucks or whatever you can spell as. a lot longer than last time i saw it...good! [vocab problem again] have to admit therere a few errors but then what am i? useless bum.
dammit the commonwealth essay. im not doing it.

ooh. that's cool. but would she feel regret? anyway, its a good start, but some details are a little off. No offense. but would Yomer really walk up to some girl and ask her to meet him? I think maybe u can add a little more into it. I like the idea though! Keep on writing, I can see you'll be able to produce some awesome stories!!