I'm kinda disappointed you didn't keep this going ): It's a really good story.

I like it so far. The narration is very intriguing. I can't wait to read more.

I...LOVE...THIS...STORY...I hope you update soon, I love them both!

what~~ this is such a perfect story. how can you just STOP there? ;_;

R!
I do wish you would continue with this! I can only think of one time that I've seen such a well written story that was told in first person. And I usually hate first person! Awesome work! I'm glad to see that you've finally learned to change paragraphs when another person talks. It still needs some improvement, but it's much better. A very good piece! Well done, and PLEASE continue!
Magz.

write more onegai.

Well, not being very good at being punctual with reviews, am I? x_X Well, you see what had happened was... Yeah ^.^
It's still good, hopefully you will write more, and then I can review!

~!shadow kei!~

WAI WAI OMG! SO GOOD! *dies* Yes yes me loves this *huggles* Makes me happy that I decided to go to fictionpress instead of fanfiction.net today...after sifting through stuff I didn't like it was WORTH IT FOR THIS! WRITE MORE OR I'LL BITE YOU! And you went to otakon too you PUNK! I wanted to go...but I can't this year cuz I'm in the wrong country for it...GAH! So write more before I hire a hit man to KIl you BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Krap this is good. You are going to give me another chapter to munch on! You are! This is so cutly awesome! When do they fall in love! I'm adding this to my fav stories list. I can't believe you don't have like 200 reviews by now! This is so awesome. I just wanna go off in a corner and read it for the longest time until there's more of it. Man- I've never even seen a story like this. It's so damn good. well-- enough of my gawking. Chow! (GIVE ME MORE TO MUNCH!)

Tenshi-Usa

P.S. Your story was so awesome I wasn't even hyper!

Ah! *Izzy grins* I really like this! Write more write more! *We*

~*Izzy-chan*~

You know, I am really liking this story. Could I post it on my site at http://www.geocities.com/etherealin_sanity/index.html or do you not want your original stuff posted elsewhere?

dark_hilde@yahoo.com

Wow! This fic is awesome! I really like Damien's character a lot. This is too cool! Hope you update soon.

I loved your story. I just wish that you had more than 2 chapters up. Are you planning to write more? Its a good idea and the characters are realistic and yet not...its a very good blend...keep up the good work and get some more of it up soon....please!

Wow, this is a good one, did you write this original, or was it based on a manga or something? *wonders puzzled* When ya writing more??

Nice birthday present my dear *giggles*
I adore it. You know I do. I just write reviews to boost your ego and make you write more *smiles* It works, doeesn't it?
I have to say that I love the line 'Sort of like actors on Broadway, only bloodier.' It's so blackly humorous and reminds me a bit of 'The Vampire Lestat' *laughs*
Anyway, get back to writing Armpit and send!! Ja ne!
~ Loz