   lil-hobbit88 2003-07-18 . chapter 12not half bad, but not half good. way to predictable. But it had good points to it as well. I did enjoy reading it but it didnt shock me. Don't get me wrong, you have great talent.
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 Ranma+Akane4Ever1 2003-02-08 . chapter 12Love it! Great job! You should make a sequel!! |
 Sacha B. Sylver 2003-02-01 . chapter 12^_^ I love a happy ending! (well, if I'm in a good mood, that is. XD)
~TBH (unincorporated) |
 sweet lullaby 2003-01-13 . chapter 12hey! i loved the story. it only took me 15 minutes to read, i was so into it! omg, its like 1am...so, i think ill read your other story. thanks for puttin me on ur favorite authors list too! ~LUvINg! |
 Kiona 2003-01-05 . chapter 12 NO!!!! It was getting real good till the end when you said you wouldnt right anymore :-( why can't you right a sequel of Alexia and Adam becoming a couple :-D |
 genies9 2003-01-05 . chapter 12Ah... well. not bad. not bad at all. It lived up to my *cough*impossibly high standards... right. lol |
 RoonilWazlib625 2003-01-05 . chapter 12Chapter 12 appeared suddenly! I like, looked back and it was here! Creepy. LOL! I love this story! I can't wait to read "A Job Well Done". I've never really read anything by you except for horror, so I'm excited to see how this one comes out! Just one question: Does Shane have Head trauma again? LOL This story was GREAT!
~~Manda~~ |
| MALINGO 2003-01-05 . chapter 11 Where is chapter 12? It isn't coming up on my computer! I wanna read it! |
| RoonilWazlib625 2003-01-04 . chapter 11 This is really going well! I can't wait to read the ending!!!! You go girl!
~Your Living Dictionary and Thesaurus, Malingo~ |
| Jackie 2003-01-04 . chapter 10 *--*--*--* hey i really love this story and don't listen to the other reviewers i think its perfect the way it is *--*--*--* u.s.!
***Jackie*** |
 kaika switched 2003-01-03 . chapter 10Interesting story so far... It would be better if you described things a bit more, elaborated a bit, but it's your story and fine just the way it is! Update soon! |
| Nicole--live2rideforever 2003-01-03 . chapter 10 Very nice, i love vampire fics, and can't wait to read the rest. keep it up! |
| RoonilWazlib625 2002-12-29 . chapter 10 Hey good job! It is moving kind of fast, but you want it like that, right? It's really good and clever! I can't wait to see the end! Keep up the good work and start that new story soon!
~Manda~ |
| QueenAmbi 2002-12-26 . chapter 9 Really good so far, you include everything, but I htink it would be better if you added more to the chapters to make them longer and more interesting. Just a thought, please update soon! |
| Hilary Duff 2002-12-26 . chapter 2 Wow, that was really good. Keep it up. xoxo |
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