Hehe loved the story Sensei! I loved the whole Ah! theme hehe cracked me up.

Hey Red,

This was a really great! I liked it alot! Especially the part with the Tiger... KITTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(ahem) I really hope you continue with this adventure idea... HEY! Maybe we could put that blindswordsman idea to work(I'm obsessed with that now) Because I noticed you saying the part about you wanting to go on other adventures with other people... I'll have to work out the details with you later.

Anyways, great chapter, kind of funny, kind of exciting, all around awesome!Keep it up Red!

Read ya later,

Hyper Guyver

I only read half of this story, cuz I have lotz 2 do, but I like it!!! I like Ah!!! He's so cute, and, kind of stoopid. Also, chap. 4 is up!!!! Some Raven/Talaeia stuff!

Ours was funny too...that was good.
Ah the Tiger! hehe, like Ariella the cub. "AHHHH!...How does everyone know his name?"

yo red!!!!!!!! this story was cool!!!!!!! i like Ah!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahahah!!!!!!! and i liked the part about defeating all the vampires in the end. it was really interesting and it kept me on the edge of my seat. :P

will you be putting up more chapters? i hope so! well, great story and write more!!!!

luv,
lener

For the last time you kill a vampire with a steak! Not a stake! Vampire's hate red meat! WHy doesn't any one seem to get that! ARGH!

Also Red, you have to make up your mind with Alma's sword either being a sword or a katana. Because even though the two are sharp peices of metal used to cut things. They are very differnt.


But all in all really great story! But when will RedLady's kingdom be back on track? I want to know who that evil dude is!

P.S. Have you seen my alternate persona? He isn't in his box and I am really scared. write me if you see him anywhere! THANKS!