obviously. the 'his' and 'him' and 'he' are all typed in capital H. if i didnt read your reviews i wont know what the hell you talking about.

and i believe that friend of yours has name starting with either s or c or j. or anyone else is not my business.

friends?
soft toys?
none for me.
thats all i have to say.

I believe the person is God...but its very good...it seems very personal and it seems very well written

Hmmm...I know who you talking about. Sad and very touching story...almost enough to make one cry.

The events of which you speak are mostly to occur with people like the person whom you described. My life is already saved, so maybe this story with save someone elses...

A clever way of presenting us with the love of God. Very interesting, but not quite powerful enough to have the impact you were wanting. A bit more development and it would really be great.
Anywayz, it was, overall, a good job though. So keep up the good work.