All the wonderful description... *Swoons in ecstasy*. I really, really enjoyed reading this particular poem. Your colors were so perfect.

Wow. That was a wonderful poem. _ I loved it. Some of the effect was lost, though, because of my sister's loudly blaring Mariah Carey (sp?). Oh, well, I'll just have to read it tomorrow when she's not listening to her... well, she calls it music. Generally, I just call it noise. Depends on which song it is. Bye!

wow! keep writing! I love the way you use language

Oh, wow. I wish I could describe things like that. But not likely... Your talent is envied. _