Considering my name...*chuckles* I just *had* to read this poem. And I'm glad I did, too. It's pretty, and the imagery is nice. However, your rhyming scheme is constantly shaken up, which in turn shook *me* up and didn't allow me to get as into the poem as I would have liked to. Overall, it's a nice piece. Keep writing! -Windsong

Beautiful poem, and I love your descriptions of the wind!

I liked this one. It was so...meaningful. Hope to see more of your work soon.

~EPF

I'm not sure if I completely get what you mean by windsong. Some parts made me think in one direction, but then others contradicted those ideas.

But maybe you were trying to do an abstract, could mean what you want it to type of poem?

It had a nice feel to it, enjoyable read.

Very thought provoking! I like the images that your words created. Thanks for your reviews! ;)

Ohhh..this is cute

Hee, cute! I enjoyed this - it had a sort of whimsical tone to it. Very nice.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

You said in your bio that you wanted everyone to be honest, so that's what I'll be (though I would have been anyway). I don't get it. I don't understand what a 'Windsong' is, so I can't understand the theme that you're elaborating on, and if you have no frame of reference or understanding of the situation or object a poem describes, you don't get it, and it makes no sense to you. Even Poe, taken out of context, can be awful. That's how I feel about this. I'm sorry about that, but it's true.
Except for the fact that I don't understand it, the rhythm and rhyme seems pretty much flawless.

Oh, wow. Ok, now I think I understand. Windsongs are like life, yes? Life and peace and truth, be I right? It's a very peaceful poem, speaking of peace. I love it!

:) I'm bbbbbaaaaaccccckkkkk! Wow I think this one is your personal best and It's going on my favorite stories list thingy. Your rescriptions come alive and you have a good flow and rhythm.

P.s. You know how when you're really young and in the car or walking? And at night it looks like the moon is following you everywhere? That's the what the first line means. So I think that should help you with the rest of my poem. (I always have to read the poem over if I don't remember which one it is!) ^.^

Aw...that one was cute! Me like! You're really good at writing poems Shelly! ^_^

Wind! Wind! I liked it, written real well. A new way to put an outlook on wind...kind of like my friend saying people are sheep...er...yea anyway I liked this poem, mystic-y. ^_^ Uh...bye now!

Very pretty. I liked it. Thanks for the review. I myself know I can get bad reviews. It's just I don't like people telling me to change, which is what I got a lot of. That breaks the line between criticsm and a bad review. I like your poem.~CT

Wow! This is amazing! You sure are talented! Oh, this is Nico (the person who's poem was screwed up), under a different name. If you look under the name of Teeto, you can read some of my stuff that the computer didn't mess up. Anyway, I'm going to finish your other stuff!