VUNDABAR! GREAT POEM DUDE!!

I liked the beginning with the rhymes and stuff and the last eight lines were great. Hehe. I have a poem written under the same title, but it's on a slightly different subject.

Oh, this is GOOD. Very powerful. I love the sense of no control, you can be flung into nightmares just as easily as dreams, but those who believe will turn out the best... way cool, phoenix, you're quite the poet! rrr-chan xxx

Child you write some long poems. But it is still good.