VERY cool story!!!! NEATONESS!!!!
~Christina! =)

This is actually pretty good, and it has a pretty decent moral - ever thought of sending it off to a kids' magazine? I think it would stand a fighting chance.
Thanks for your reviews for "Writer's Choice," "Fallen Scythe," and "Sea of Thought" - as well as the compliments! *hands Moonwinges plushies for all her reviews and the kindness she showed in doing so*

Very nice, considering it was written when you were in seventh grade. Keep on writing.~CT

LOL! I remember this from 7th grade too! I posted mine as well...^.^ That was really good...WAY better than mine...I can't believe I actually wrote mine so...NORMAL...^_^;;

Wow...that story made me soooo hungry! I could almost taste the chocolate...Anyway, I really enjoyed it! I like the way the characters interacted, and I loved the descriptions! I would really enjoy hearing more about Blue and Sora; you know, more adventures with their new powers!