I have read one of your other stories so i read this one also. i really like the stlye you write in, its very good and keeps the reader wanting more, i like the twist with Kristy and Beau too.

A new type of girl. I like her so far. Sounds like it's a great story in the making, keep up the good work.

Isn't it depressing how us serious writers never get any reviews? It is enough to make somebody gouge their eyes out with a spoon...
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...Anyway, keep with it, it is always slow at first. You have a good first chapter.