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| shadow61x 2004-11-15 ch 1,   | Really great. I agree with what you say, however I didn't quite get the 'bleeding eyes' eyes part. Oh well, I'm only a highschool student, I'm still learning. -shadow61x |
| cosmo-queen 2003-06-01 ch 1, | I loved this. Time- such an interesting concept, it never fails to amaze me. I definitely agree with what you're saying. Great poem, keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| The Black Rider 2003-03-29 ch 1, | That is exactly what I was thinking when I wrote "Time." Very true indeed. |
| nimue webweaver 2003-03-24 ch 1, | ok nice poem. but im actually wondering if you took down that other thingy or not. it had questions and people were supposed to answer them and u would respond and stuff like that. it was on faith and stuff. i cant find it and i was wondering what the name was or if you took it off. or was that even you? i it wasnt im so srry and i think ive gone mad.lol k please respond and let me know cuz i thought it was a very cool idea |
| Heart of the Sword (FPNET i... 2003-03-22 ch 1, | We were talking about this in class the other day. How is anyone really late if there is no such thing as time? Time was just created to give us a sense of measurement and order. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Hopes Forgotten 2003-03-17 ch 1, | That was good, well written. |
| Familiar Alien 2002-12-08 ch 1, | Our existence revolves around time doesn't it. It's always time to do this, time to do that. We become so wrapped up in our schedule that we forget what living really is. I hope your college life is fine, stay away from all the wild parties! (Wink, Wink) ^_^ |
| karmakaze 2002-11-25 ch 1, | It's 9:28. JK. I really like it, very true. Yet sometimes time goes really slow, when you don't want it to. That's besides the point. Your writing is extremely vivid. Keep writing:) |
| Wall of Fire 2002-11-15 ch 1, | Time is something that must be accepted as it is. Once you have done that, you are free to enjoy what it has to offer and you can begin to truly live your life. |
| valpincon 2002-11-10 ch 1, | this is fascinating...true and totally individual. do you call it poetry? i suppose it is in a way, if its true that 'poetry is to prose as dancing is to walking' - the wors have a flow and an elegance you dont see in general prose, even though the form is not recognisably poetic...i like this very much! |