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IdiotMaru 2005-01-26 . chapter 3
I liked this chapter, and I think you did a great job with both musical styles. I'm still getting used to all the names and personalities, but I think I got them down all right...and down't fret, rock's more my thing too (and I'm a horrible moshpit addict!), but I can *stand* some quality pop now and again...usually not of the dancing kind, but you made the characters very likable. I think one of my favorite characters is Daniel, I love the onstage/offstage disparity...well, with all of them, actually...which is pretty true in rock, isn't it (that you can't be hardcore ALL the time, that's way true of Kishi)? Anyway, I'll review again after I read some more. Great story, though! You're really talented! ^^
The Ruin 2003-01-19 . chapter 7
V glad you reviewed my stuff... cos if you hadn't I'da never found this *bg*!! I totally know what you mean about reviews, but keep writing, this is amazing!! It just gets better and better as the characterization gets better, the interview really helped with that one indeed.
The one thing I would say is as of yet there is no clear story. Apart from that it's really good - even the slash - which usually makes me squirm, I am sorry to admit - is very good.
I'll be R&Ring your other stuff as soon as I get the chance.
Nessa
PS - Sending my muse your way!!
PPS - your name is such a lie!
Bitter Berry 2003-01-11 . chapter 7
-stares-

Hmm. Umm...-stares a bit longer- Okay. -composes self- YAY! -_-; They are together! Together, they are! -lol- That was really sexy. Kishi and Lukas are sexy. You're sexy. -lol- Anyway.

Thanks for that wonderful slashy-ness. It was yummy. Mmmm. Hope you had a good sleep...b/c you're going to put the next chapter up soon! Right? Right. ^__^

Much love,
Bitter B.
Bitter Berry 2003-01-05 . chapter 6
Awww, Kishi broke down. *sobs along with him*

Yes, *we* want to see Lukas/Kishi. It's good stuff. -nods- But plot is good too. You are doing a super job. I think it's going well. I like Kishi the most...probably because I love guys that have a past that they'd like to forget. O_O Right.

I'll be waiting for the next chappy! *sits* Yup.

-Bitter B.
MunsterInSlippers 2003-01-05 . chapter 6
gah im not a slash person but this isnt such a bad fic.so i cant give advice.....gewd chap
MunsterInSlippers 2003-01-05 . chapter 5
thanx!!! i need to update....gah gewd chap
Bitter Berry 2002-12-31 . chapter 5
It'd be a bit freaky if Kishi *was* pregnant. O_O

Anyway, I thought the interview added a nice touch. This chapter was more detailed with the characters. Goody! *lol*

Yay! I'm enrolled in a family! XD I've always wanted a family...*sniffle* I luff you all. *walks off sobbing*

-Bitter B.
MunsterInSlippers 2002-12-30 . chapter 4
if u want i can mention u in my fic it should give you one or two more reviewers. gewd chapter ill also mention the ppl you advertised in your own fic, k? btw its in my pro. its called what things stand for
MunsterInSlippers 2002-12-30 . chapter 3
loved the chap!!!! ill read her fic as long as u update
MunsterInSlippers 2002-12-30 . chapter 2
its gewd. i listen to hard rock so if u turn it into some pop ppl r better thing ill give it up
Bitter Berry 2002-12-27 . chapter 4
*glomps you* I should strangle all the people that aren't reviewing this. *gets out wire*

This is so cool. It's so sarcastic and bloody awesome. I loved the nice Kishi/Richie scene. Niiice.

The humor is great. I can't help but giggle *yes giggle* in every chapter. Keep writing no matter what.

Love you,
-Bitter B.
AriadneEthereal 2002-11-17 . chapter 2
I like it. Very funny and well-written. I want to know more, so keep writing, pretty please!
your name here 2002-11-10 . chapter 1
hmmm. this sounds interesting. write more.
MunsterInSlippers 2002-11-10 . chapter 1
ooooooh it sounds really gewd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Lippy 2002-11-10 . chapter 1
I like it. Sorry to invalidate your pen name, but you do have talent. "Which one of you wise guys put a guy in my bed?" Hilarious. Write more. And then I will return to review.
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