 InsanoFreakChild 2004-07-30 . chapter 1aw *sniffle* wonderful, just wonderful. And I tink that is da right choice, whether or not you want it to be... por you... great job on the poem though. |
 EiDa 2002-11-11 . chapter 1I am happy for you coz you seem to have drawn the line between friendship and love while as for me...well, not quite the case. Your poem is effective and its simplicity reflects the honesty of your theme...Keep it up! And do try to review some of my poems some time... |
 DefianceIsMe 2002-11-10 . chapter 1This line between friend and lover is very fine and it seems to me you are doing a balancing act right on top of it...My suggestions to what you should do is be true to yourself. If you don't dig deep down and find your true feelings you will regret it later. Also don't rush into anything...It'll end badly...About the poem. Hmmm Let's see I thought it was heartwarming and so sweet and I'm really glad I'm not in a situation like that right now. I don't think I could deal. Now of course you don't have to follow my silly advice. I am only a strange girl you have never met....^_^ |
 Talia Falcon 2002-11-10 . chapter 1A rather incredibly written poem. Sweet, touching, and very familiar. A feeling I have too. Keep writing... |