Ah.. the imagery is really good.. N i simply enjoyed the poem.. How u linked a tree to life.. Its beautiful n well written.. Great job here..

I love it. You express yuorself with phenomenal metaphors, and the allusions you make are a very nice taste. Nice work.
~Toireasa

i liked this poem, too. i like how you use trees as metaphors- great choice. trees are symbolic of unbreakable strength and endurance, yet somehow of flexibility and living as well.. in my opinion. i love how the decision you have to make is turned into something almost tangible- u can almost feel the wind as u try to figure out how to overcome your obstacle.

So true: you can keep going, even when you're confused, or you can stall, and stay comfortable forever. Isn't it better to live life well, and take some risks, and live better than to live with black-and-white and be bored, and always safe? A wonderful metaphor, though I got lost about halfway through for a bit (though that may be a result of the fact that my mom is listening to a radio program at the moment).

Sorry I'm taking up all of your review pages! But my parents are totally freaked about the thought of me contacting someone they don't know personally... um. Anyway, loved your poem! Gotta go!!

Wow, sounds like life, it's clear at first then it get's complicated ^_^ It was good

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Wow - great poem! I really enjoyed the descriptions! It made me feel...oh, I don't know...whole. I loved it!

This was a wonderful, poem. And I think you made your point perfectly clear, although it was a little long and repetive. ( I have a problem with that too) A very true poem, and The Raven and Anabell Lee are my favorite poems by Poe. Hmm, I don't think I'm that great... I don't really think much when I write my poems... Also, being almost two years younger than me gives me an advantage I suppose. So keep writing and you'll surpass all the rest! :) :o)

A very nice poem. Keep writing. BTW, to your comment, on "A Writer's Life", when I say 'visit places', I mean in mind, not literally. Don't worry, you weren't the only one who was confused by that. Keep writing as well.~CT