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| EiDa 2002-11-11 ch 1,  | abuseSoooooo nice! Wow! *bows her head curtly* You are a true modern poet! Modern poet, I say, because you're style was so casual and not Shakespearian...it makes it so natural and honest. I love every last bit of it but my personal favorite is: "The sidewalks filled with people who Inside their minds think 'I know you'. But they don't see me like he does." You clearly emphasized your theme here, great job! I hope you could read some of my poems too...Write more! |
| WindedStar 2002-11-10 ch 1, | abusethis is a wonderfull poem, I can really relate to it. |