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| the mouse that roared 2004-05-11 ch 1,   | Wow... you were really depressed... It's well written, though... It's practically a definition of long term depression. |
| fearphobic 2003-08-06 ch 1, | so i had to comment abt this one...i mean itz jus to good... but i gotta say this...it sounds more like a song rather than a poem... |
| aviatrix 2003-08-01 ch 1, | my angst-o-meter's going off the charts. it's not so much that i don't like the poem, but that the poem makes me dislike the person it's about. |
| Lady Ariel 2003-05-19 ch 1, | I love the repition. You have a wonderful way with words, but for some reason it feels as if you're repeating what you heard rather than expressing from the heart. Maybe it's the rhythm? *shrug* It's still really good. Is this a song? (Sorry if you said that in the summary) Good job. :D Do you write any free-verse? It might sound more heart-felt. Just being thoughtful. :D "The hardest part of life is living." -Britt |
| Keighan Moureau 2003-05-06 ch 1, | Love it. I can relate. Sometimes I feel so depressed. Whenever I read your poems, I get tunes in my head(mostly piamo and violin, since I play them). Keep up the great work! |
| Yuki Shiro 2002-11-11 ch 1, | *tear* This is a REALLY depressing poem. It's extremely well written, my sunflower. Something just connects with me about it, and it helps bring my current aged-14 depressive feelings into a new light. ~Yuki PS: Thanx for R&R-ing Untitled. you might like my newest poem too!!! |