|Reviews for Little Heart|
| the mouse that roared 5/11/04 . chapter 1
The "line" is very deep. Wow. Good poem.
| Happy-Platipus 1/20/04 . chapter 1
Amazing! Amazing! Amazing!
I love these lines:
'Oh don't lie
In the ocean of your pain'
'How else can you live?'
'And know that I've forgiven you...'
'I'll always love you'
You are so amazing! you write such amazing poems! The world is so amazing!
Your poem is so beautiful and true!
| weasleygranger not signed in 9/11/03 . chapter 1
This is just to beautiful , words just can't add up , I love it. Keep writing .
| these kids 8/31/03 . chapter 1
I love the content. The stanza that struck me as the strongest was "Then came that horrible day
Not a minute too late
When you saw that in every way
You’d become the very person you hate..."
I thought that it showed suhc strength in realization and it made me think back on a time where I had done the same thing. I could hear the melody in my head as I read along and that is awesome. keep writing :)
| Needa S 12/4/02 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Keep writing!
| Deana Bell 11/11/02 . chapter 1
Oh my Bob this is exactly like what I'm going through right now! This is such an awesome song keep writing! (Thanks for the comfort)