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dreamer 2007-07-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou should be friends with that guy. i think everyone deserves at least one friend.it makes my day when at least one person says hi to me.
total vintage 2006-08-06 ch 1,	abuseWow, I love this poem because I know exactly how it feels to be that guy. I liked the way you described everything...it was very well done. :)
Alenor 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abusethat's a great poem, sad but great. i used to know what it felt like to be the one that people only noticed when they had something bad to say and really it's not nice, i'm glad you wrote a poem with insight into that situation ~ Alenor.
hello-deerie02 2006-02-19 ch 1,	abusewow... that was great. I know you wrote this story in 02, and now it is 06: guess i've been living under a rock somewhere(hmm...curious that i dont know if ive been living under a rock or not). I can totally connect with the person in this story; I had to set the story to music and then i started crying. i wish i didnt know how this boy felt, but i do. I know people who are like him too, and it hurts. I just wanted to say thanks for noticing; now i will stop sounding so depressed and pensive. Once again its great to know you notice!!
Lucy-the-bookworm 2005-06-17 ch 1,	abuseI liked it! I didn't see it at depression, but as a kid trapped and waiting for some to say hey notice me. It reminds me of a country song by I think Tim McGraw. about the freckle faced little boy that everyone ignores and wishes he was noticed. all in all this was very understanding to that person.
miss-ellen 2005-05-06 ch 1,	abusemy mate told me about this story & sent me the link while we were on msn, this is really sad... i feel sorry for that guy. i guess noone actually realises how they make people feel until someone like you does the whole 'their perspective' thing. wipes tear away this is really good
Fish 2005-05-06 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is really well written and enjoyable to read. The only thing is that i thought 'The Guy With The Red Folder' would have made a better name, but that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work.
Starshone 2005-05-06 ch 1,	abuseLove the subject - there's a real message in it, I think. I also really like how the rhyming scheme, while conventional, isn't handled in a trite elementary-school-ish way. Good stuff. :)
Disoriented Waste 2005-03-13 ch 1,	abuse.. you know I've noticed 'that' person before and there's always more than meets the eye.. Bt the fact you noticed is I mean.. It means something right? Most people wouldn't trust a second glance... I suggest talking to him. Don't ask me why
Sparkl3star 2005-03-03 ch 1,	abuseWow... Thats like... wrenching.. I'm gunna learn everyone's names now.
EternalDamnation 2005-01-27 ch 1,	abuseWow. I like it. Hm...never really thought of this before. Maybe I should search for my school's "nobody". This is really good. Very nice. Haha, I make it sound as if you're writing something about bunnies. Oops. Nice rhymes too, but I suggest you make it less subtle (or is it more...I forgot which one), unless, of course, you wanted it to be obvious. Eh, whatever, I'm done blabbering.
Deeply-N-Love 2005-01-09 ch 1,	abuseLoneliness can hurt, loneliness gives you pain, loneliness can drive yourself into madness, loneliness can kill. Your work is true. Not a fiction, not a nightmare... it's about a cruel reality. Keep on writting, you're very talentfull. And, I wish someone will give a little smile to that boy before it's too late - before he'll be drowned by this painfull solitude... W!nny -x-
tainted x love 2004-12-27 ch 1,	abusewow, fantastic work. this poem reminds me of me. i'm the person in school that no one notices. so it's all familiar. but still you've done a great job on this.
YueDreamer 2004-11-22 ch 1,	abusean emotional and cynical poem. but i liked it ^_^
starry 2004-08-17 ch 1, anon.	abusethat was so sad and awesome at the same time... sniff... great job!

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