This is so sweet...
I like the structure and the gracefulness of it.
You are a great poet!
I love your nature poems!

*gapes, is speechless* Uh...uh...ugg?

Mori: *stares* -.-* What she means to say is that she finds your writing most amazingg and the poem extremely to-

Tiri: *bursts into tears* It's s-so s-s-s-sad! *buries her face in Mori's shoulder*

Mori: *gags, shoves Tiri towards Elinde*

Elinde: I don't want her! *lets Tiri cry onto her shoulder anyway*

Ithi: Anyway, Kai's touched, because normally she doesn't let us write the reviews. This almost makes me want to make her go write...hm...

Mori: So, good poem, we'll read some more. *nods*

Elinde: Write more too!

That was just so beautifully written.. I really like how u linked it to rain.. I think rain is real nice.. I liked the last two lines best.. As well as the second paragraph.. How coincidental, I was just considerin why everytime me and my friend went out, it would pour.. Maybe the sky really is crying.. Wonderful poetry u have there..

I like this very much. Keep up the good work. ^_-

*glares at stupid fictionpress for not allowing her to log in*
Great poem, it's really pretty ^^ Thanks for the reviews

o.pretty.I like it.I love watching the rain.especially when I'm feeling blue.

as to the reviewing case.I review a lot of people, and some of them answer back, but not all of them.I try to review all people who review mine..after all they took the time to review my stuff.besides..they almost always have really good stuff.You do.It's really nice.I'm going to try to read it all when I have the time.but I have a half a dozen other people to review too.

Byeness!
Cat

Powerful emotions and a beautiful tone. Not my favorite, but that's because it was almost *too* painful. Anyways, I love it.
~Toireasa

Nice rhyming. You have a very good handle on that.

Oh, and when you asked me in one review you gace me whether or not it was freestyle or not...yes, it is. Most of my poems are freestyle.

But, I digress! Excellent job. It is a thought, isn't it?

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

Wow!!! *claps* I love the verse that says..."The rain then begins to fade,As all tirades must,And I wonder if it is possible,That the skies are crying just for us."

gorgeous poem- very powerful ending. ur work is really good!!! the metaphor of the rain is very significant and really gets ur point across strongly. i think this is my favorite of the ones i've read so far.

Yea, I'd have to second Val Mora's question. Is it hard for you to rhyme it like that? I had to spit out a song for a novel I'm working on, and making it rhyme was AGONY.

Anyways, another beautiful poem, although I must say, my personal preference is for Winter's Sorrow. =P

And thanks for reviewing my work! I'm going to finish Soul of the Sword as time permits (working on chapter 15 right now!). And I am a member of elfwood, as well as of epilogue (another awesome writer/artist community!). I'll be back to read the rest of your stuff later! For now is finals time in school for me...

Is it hard to make all your verses rhyme? I mean, do you intend to do it, and put a lot of effort into it, or does it just HAPPEN? I would go mad if I had to think about all my work that much. *sweatdrop* I like! They always tell you that rain is angels... oh, darn, I forget. Is it crying? Probably with joy. Anyway, maybe they're crying for the people here. Neh, ignore me. I'm MAD! Hoo, boy. *slaps the little inner-perky-person around and goes back to grumbling in a uniquely Zhara-esque fashion* At any rate, many plushies as thanks for reading "Lightning Inspiration," "Home Again," (which was written for school, with a deadline, and at a time when I was fresh out of ideas - and I had just finished the LHM trilogy and had not yet gotten over my Van and Moondance obsession [still haven't!]. I swear I've put up a disclaimer now!), and "Shadowstorm," (I'll keep in mind that the characters are hard to keep track of - so far you know Alean, and Zhara, and the 'random' person in the last chapter - and I'll try to mark which chapters are from whose POV, or when they change. Apologies.). Actually, I've come to a realization about "Kiy" that will free me up to write a lot more of it. I'm glad you like it!

WOW! that was great! everything was just perfect in that poem!
........Wow......your're good!

Hello again, I'm reviewing someone's professional work right now (in other words, you!). Anyway, thanks for leaving so many nice reviews. It made me feel just wonderful! Oh, and there IS a story that goes with The Dragon's Misty Breath, but I need to finish it, edit it 2000 times, then get it published! (By the way, I don't think that's happening anytime soon.) Well, I loved your poem! So, when do we get more stuff here??? Thank you so much! You have definitly changed my life for the better!!!
~*~Kiayla~*~

Whoo, I liked this one but I'm speachless ^_^ Geez your poems are really good

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