wow. um...i seriously cant find anything wrong with that. ...maybe cuz ive been in a similar situation.

Pretty good use of repetition. Not too bad. Kinda confusing at parts, but nice use of contradiction between a few of the lines. ALso, good use of repetition. Nice job

~Jess

i thought i reviewed this.. hmm strange.. oh well. i'll review again! i like this.. its so strange. u do do strange things when u get bored.. lol maybe i read this in class one day.. maybe that's what it was.. hmm.. this is gonna bug me.. o well
~stregaluna

its a very good poem. Very introspective, but i like it.

what d'ya mean "pretty bad"? you're too ** yourself. :) nicely done, and although the theme suggests otherwise, the emotions really showed through in this poem.

-_^ keep writing!

*eyes glaze over* Must click review button...:P

Anyway, that was a very powerful piece. The title, as you said, was a bit confusing, but after reading the poem it makes perfect sense. Or...at least I think it does.

Kudos! ^.^

Ya-wei! *hands out cookies* This is wonnerful! I love the concept, especially the beginning about love and hate. "I'm not ready to die again" is a lovely line, too.

Muchas nicey indeed!

Nice poem, a little sad, but nice! Well, what else to say? I don't know... There isn't much more to say, really...

Keep it up

Hey, this is really great. There's no way poetry can be bad, not if you really put your heart into it. I have heard many times that poetry is 90% passion and heart and only 10% talent. I'd say you have a nack for both ^.^ Really wonderful poem. I feel I can relate, expressing emotions isn't exactly my cup of tea ^.^" But thats OK, we all have our bumps in the road. Really great! Thumbs!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-
PS: Thank you so much for your review on "Child's Eyes", it really meant a lot to me and I'm glad you liked my little story. "Child's Eyes" is like my baby, metaphorically speakiing of course ^.^" And it makes me happy to know that others enjoy it, too.
Thanks again! Arrivederci!

It's great! I really like it!! Keep ^ the good work! :) Laura

hey...i really like this poem!!! i can relate to it sooo much! thank you....keep posting...ill keep reading

You said this was bad? Far from it. I thought it was awesome! There were a few places where the words didn't flow perfectly, but overall, it was wonderful.

i love it!! it is so true..i guess i get the title..it fits this poem very well...you have a lot of talent in you...keep writing