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| Phillipea 2006-04-01 ch 4, | I was rather enjoying it until the last paragraph. It was odd...but enjoyable. With a bit of moral improvement I would've added it to my favourites list. |
| LeVampireNoir 2004-06-21 ch 1, | yes, i'm sorry, i should. i've written more, but my creative juices have lately dried up and i'm working on getting them flowing again. i'll get to it as soon as possible. |
| insert name here 2004-06-12 ch 4, | as i recall, it has been a really freakin long time since you added to this, you should remedy that. |
| ShadyCreek 2003-12-27 ch 4, | no...well i suppose adding matthew to the little family could be a good thing. i wonder what happens... |
| ShadyCreek 2003-12-27 ch 3, | yea a new character i hope he lives when something happens |
| ShadyCreek 2003-12-27 ch 2, | wow thats all i could say...wow |
| ShadyCreek 2003-12-27 ch 1, | i love this story...you start it off very well. the discription is great |