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| dum-penguin 2003-09-14 ch 1,   | To me that reads more like a poem at the moment but thats probably just because I can't get a tune or tempo into my head. I'd like to hear how you'd like it to sound if you get what I mean? Y'know lyrics are the best part of the song but they only complete it with the music. These words stand alone pretty well and thats something you should be proud of. :) *thumbs* dp |
| Angry Artista 2003-07-10 ch 1, | Hm... Yeah, i dont see it as a song, but it was still good. I just can't get a tune going in my head to it... maybe if i try harder ::goes back and reads again:: ~*V. R. Ewing*~ |
| soundtrack to screwups 2003-03-16 ch 1, | I like it... NO good girl is she. Poetry! MU HAHAHAHA! |
| Duchess of Serendair 2003-01-06 ch 1, | If this is your first song, then I would have to say wow. To me, it seems to have all the elements that a song would have. And, since I pick strange things out sometimes, I like the last line and how it fits with the rest. Good job! |
| Babie Blue 2002-11-17 ch 1, | wow that was really good! Deep Chilling but really good! Gosh i wish i could write like you! l0l! C u do make a gr8 song writer! |
| Wrong Name Tag 2002-11-16 ch 1, | It sounds a tad bit more like a poem than a song, but either way, it's awesome. It flows well and sounds nice, though it is a tad bit sad. Awesome job though. Keep it up! ^_^ -Jessie |
| Keep it 100 2002-11-13 ch 1, | Well, for being new at this you're pretty darn good. Keep on writing songs. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Hanson 2002-11-13 ch 1, | wow, not bad it's hard to go from poetry to songs too, was that really your first song? It's good, original, is it largo or what? I like to know the tempo keep going peace, Tmy |
| Believable Facade 2002-11-13 ch 1, | OK...this poem amkes me feel pretty bad... I still love ya though! I just now...kinda feel guilty about this guy I broke up with... :( thanks for being sorry about my bf...I'm gonna talk to him tomorrow:) |
| Phate 2002-11-13 ch 1, | dude I think its awsome keep writing! |