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| Jiffer 2002-11-21 ch 1, | Romance: an adventure, or series of extraordinary events, resembling those narrated in romances; as, his courtship, or his life, was a romance. A dreamy, imaginative habit of mind; a disposition to ignore what is real; as, a girl full of romance. ________ This is an excellent, well-written story. Not only was it thought provoking, but the way you presented your ideas with rather humourous cynicism, really seemed like a good technique in getting the points across. I agree with your outlooks on romance which may be one of the reasons I enjoyed the story so much. I also think that you did an excellent job describing your love for Alice Springs. It reminds me a little of my own sort of bitter-sweet fondness for my home in the Virginia mountains, where if the nats won't get you, the rattle-snakes and bears most definately will (or else the suicidal deer who like to throw themselves at your car hood). Awesome story, -Jiffer- |